You Should Have Listened

I knew something was wrong the moment I walked into the room. The door swung open on its own, revealing a space that should have been my sanctuary – a cozy living room bathed in the warm glow of a vintage floor lamp – but instead, it was shrouded in eerie disarray.

The furniture was toppled as if someone had meticulously overturned every item. My eyes were drawn to a wrinkled piece of paper lying on the coffee table, its ink smeared by an inexplicable dampness.

A chill trickled down my spine. I reached for the paper and unfolded it with trembling fingers. In hurried, uneven scrawl, it read, ‘You should have listened to me.’

I moved cautiously toward the window. A gentle breeze fanned the curtain, and there, on the sill, lay a cassette tape labelled ‘Truth’ in a neat, looping handwriting.

I found a small tape recorder on a side table and with a mix of dread and determination, I slid the tape in. The device crackled to life, and a shrill woman’s voice filled the silence. It was like a very bad imitation of Margaret Thatcher. It was my recently deceased mother.

It was typical; even after death she couldn’t resist running my life. The room was suddenly cold as if someone had opened a window wide on a brisk winter night. I felt mother’s vile presence in the room.

I pulled the tape from the recorder and stomped on it:  a poor substitute for dancing on her grave.

Words: Richard Rooney

Illustration: A.I.

 

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